Lumen Outfitters
Bayside Academy
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Submitted May 14, 20261:20 runtimelumen-outfitters.mp4
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Submitted by Lumen Outfitters of Bayside Academy (Miami, FL).
Score by judge
| Criterion | Judge 1 | Judge 2 | Judge 3 | Mean |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| First Impressions | 4 | 2 | 3 | 2.9 |
| Branding Package | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.6 |
| Logo, Fonts, and Color Palette | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.6 |
| Consistency Across Elements | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.6 |
| Relevance to the Business | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.9 |
Judge feedback
Judge 1
The fundamentals are all here; the presentation needs another editing pass before it lands.
Judge 2
Genuinely creative approach. A few claims need supporting numbers to be persuasive.
Judge 3
Well organized and easy to follow. The middle section drags and dilutes the message.